Matthew Graybosch
author by choice, techie by necessity

When You Don't See Me: Revision Log

These log entries are generated when I check in changes to my draft file with the RCS tools provided with OpenBSD.

Revision 1.29 2020/11/11 04:49:38 demifiend

Fixed some typos in the last two scenes.

Revision 1.28 2020/11/11 04:16:07 demifiend

When You Don't See Me is officially a kissing book.
Word count: 1443

Revision 1.27 2020/11/11 03:03:34 demifiend

Christabel has met Morgan, and gotten his attention.
Word count: 1656.

Revision 1.26 2020/11/10 04:37:37 demifiend

Annelise has thrown herself into her role.
Oh, wait. She's Christabel now.
Annelise is some other person.
Word count: 1596 words.

Revision 1.25 2020/11/09 03:52:14 demifiend

Retitled “Moxie” to “Pawn Promotion”.

Revision 1.24 2020/11/09 03:51:30 demifiend

Renamed the current scene from “The Making of Christabel Crowley” to “Moxie” for now.
Scene length is 2306, with a 72 word footnote (2378 total).
Annelise isn't content to be a pawn.
Maybe retitle this section “Pawn Promotion?“

Revision 1.23 2020/11/08 04:15:40 demifiend

“The Soft Doctrines of Isaac Magnin” turned out to be a 3663 word infodump, but fuck it. We'll fix it in revisions. Also have a 148 word outtake about Morgan's visits to shrinks as a kid.

Revision 1.22 2020/11/07 04:46:31 demifiend

Fixed some typos and a couple of awkward phrasings that show up while reading to Catherine.

Revision 1.21 2020/11/07 04:20:04 demifiend

Renamed “The Soft Doctrines of Isaac Magnin” to “Bright Lights, Big City"
Roughed out “Bright Lights, Big City” at 2469 words
Next scene is “The Soft Doctrines of Isaac Magnin”

Revision 1.20 2020/11/06 16:54:08 demifiend

Rearranged subtrees in org-mode document

Revision 1.19 2020/11/06 05:13:26 demifiend

Added song lyrics for reference when I need inspiration.

Revision 1.18 2020/11/06 03:19:44 demifiend

Fixed some typos and dropped words after reading “The Revenge of Borgia Pizza” to Catherine.

Revision 1.17 2020/11/06 02:54:51 demifiend

Added the next section heading: “The Soft Doctrines of Isaac Magnin”.

Revision 1.16 2020/11/06 02:53:58 demifiend

Just roughed out the first part of Christabel's story at 2349 words.

Revision 1.15 2020/11/05 23:39:38 demifiend

Restructured the draft because I've decided how I want to present my characters’ stories.

Revision 1.14 2020/11/05 04:46:42 demifiend

Setting up chapter 3.

Revision 1.13 2020/11/05 04:42:28 demifiend

Tightened up the dialogue after reading Morgan's scene in chapter 2 to Catherine.

Revision 1.12 2020/11/05 04:12:16 demifiend

Finished Morgan's scene in chapter 2 at 2198 words.
Christabel just dropped a bomb.
Now the story will really get rolling.

Revision 1.11 2020/11/04 03:36:10 demifiend

Roughed out Naomi's scene in Chapter 2 at 1827 words.
I wonder if making the Starbreaker not only sentient but snarky is too much?
And Naomi thought Elric had it tough…

Revision 1.10 2020/11/03 03:39:29 demifiend

Roughed out Annelise's scene for Chapter 2.
2089 words tonight.
This scene's a keeper.

Revision 1.9 2020/11/02 23:38:56 demifiend

File got mangled when checking in v1.8

Revision 1.8 2020/11/02 23:35:53 demifiend

Moved the 11/1 version of Morgan's scene in chapter 2 to the outtakes.
Making Annelise's scene in chapter 2 the first one.

Revision 1.7 2020/11/01 21:54:58 demifiend

Tighted up the beginning of Morgan's scene in chapter 2.

Revision 1.6 2020/11/01 21:33:57 demifiend

Finished Morgan's scene in Chapter 2. Naomi's up next.

Revision 1.5 2020/10/30 20:10:43 demifiend

Updated the outline to mention that Naomi has the Starbreaker.

Revision 1.4 2020/10/30 04:27:18 demifiend

Finished Morgan's scene in chapter 1. Added footnotes concerning einherjar. Current word count is 5536. Time for chapter 2?

Revision 1.3 2020/10/27 01:31:01 demifiend

Finished scene 2 of chapter 1. Naomi was easier to write. Morgan's next.

Revision 1.2 2020/10/26 00:26:37 demifiend

Finished scene 1 of chapter 1. Got ideas for the next two scenes.

Revision 1.1 2020/10/25 05:58:40 demifiend

Initial version